Hello there, George! As a hard-core patriot of this incredible country, I thought this was pretty good. The words you used were excellent and appropriate, and with this last year being the 75th anniversary of D-Day, I know those soldiers who stormed Normandy Beach would be proud to read them, and you as well for writing them! My father fought in WWII in the Navy and a half-brother who fought in Vietnam, and the Stars and Stripes will forever be sacred to me! As for the technical part of this review, I'm no poetry expert, but the meter seemed good, and the rhyming was spot on! Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and welcome back to WdC! We missed ya!
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