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 If You Can't Dream, You'll Scream. Open in new Window. [13+]
MLK Jr's "I have a dream" speech, in homage, not a blasphemous parody. Hopefully.
by Melisscious Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Greetings, Melisscious!
For such a short piece, I thought this was pretty good! And I love the subject you wrote about. To quote an Aerosmith song, “Something’s wrong with the world today,” but I DO know what it is! It’s the utter and total ignorance of some people (and certain pathetic U.S. president to be specific!) who refuse to believe in global warming, and it makes me sick!
Yeah, this subject really touches a nerve with me.
I’m so glad you wrote about this, and using The Declaration of Indendence and MLK’s ‘I have a dream’ speech was a nice (and original) way to do it!
Very, very well done, my friend! The spelling and grammar was flawless (thank you!), and that last line was perfect!
Kee ponw ritin gon, Melisscious! Please! And welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you’re going to love it here!
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