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*Delight*This evocative title caught my attention on the Random Read page and wow! I like your unique words and style. I find your free style expression fascinating. The voice is potent and so dramatic. The imagery is brilliant and it was an interesting theme. You really capture the essence of this goddess's loss. *Thumbsup* I wonder if you had a specific goddess in mind, it seems she had a brother.

I like how you use the french word SANS for effect. Oh and the latin too! You may want to to add a note as to it's meaning at the end ...just in case folks don't get it! *Wink*

*Burstr* I enjoyed her strong voice that stayed consistent to the end and her anger and sadness at what once was. Kept to story of blaming the one man. *Smile* The pauses, coloured words, capitals and the one liner were effective in the read.

*Star* Thanks for sharing this complex vision. It was fun to read. Keep on writing as the muse dictates! Have fun at WDC!

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