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Greetings, Camel Guy!
I'm no expert on poetry, but I thought this wasn't bad. I'm also no astrologist, but I've heard that certain signs of the Zodiac tend to clash. So you might want to be sure of the sign of whoever you're sending this to first! *Laugh*
Seriously, for as short as it is, it does have some romanticism to it. The spelling and grammar was excellent, and although it exactly rhyme, you still got your point across.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Camel Guy, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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