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Greetings, Lady Patriot!
I love horror, so that byline about demons caught my eye.
This is good. I like the simplicity of it, and they rhyming and meter was great. I'm not quite sure what to make of it though. I realize you're ridding yourself of this male and female demon (who to me almost seem like fraternal twins), and that the female takes over when the male doesn't 'cut the mustard', so to speak. But as to the lust and charm I'm a bit confused.
No need to explain though. I know some poetry is meant for the readers to interpret for themselves, so if that's what this is, that's fine.
Overall, good job!
Kee ponw ritin gon, L.P.! Thanks for sharing this, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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