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 Review #4536579 |
 | Slut  [13+] About my early twenties  |
| (4.5)  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! Hello there, Earlymorningrise! Huh. For one of your first pieces on here, this might be one of the most honest and revealing pieces I've read. And I thought you did a great job writing it. You don't have your bio up yet, so I don't know how old you are, but apparently you had a reason (or there WAS a reason) for doing this, and even though I doubt most people would admit, I think we all went through phases like this at one time or another. You said you 'lost it' after your mother died, but you weren't psychotic. I lost my mother when I was only 11, and I also lost it but I didn't go psychotic. But like you, it did change me. I also see your reasoning for doing this when you said you were looking for love and acceptance. I can't agree or disagree that you went about it the right way, but I'm not God, so I sure as hell ain't gonna judge you! You said you were also looking for freedom, and in a lot of ways and for a lot of people, having several different partners is the only way they can find that. That last line really summed it all perfectly. It's ironic that those two should have to come together like that, but the world works in mysterious ways. BTW, I'm old enough to remember the sexual revolution of the 60's (but I obviously wasn't old enough to experience it  ), so if this happened during that time, then you don't need any reason to explain yourself. Actually, even now you don't need any reason to explain yourself.Well done, Early. I'm really impressed that you'd be so open and share something like this, and I admire you for doing so!  One tiny niggle in an otherwise really good piece: 'It was lose and freedom all rolled into one' (loss) Kee ponw ritin gon, my friend, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write (and I encourage to keep doing so!), then you're going to love it here! PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something about you (hobbies, favorite books/authors, location, etc.), but that's up to you, of course. PPS-And since you’re new here, perhaps you’d like to check out "Noticing Newbies" and introduce yourself to the rest of the community if you haven’t already.
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You responded to this review 03/11/2020 @ 11:44pm EDT