Hi The White Flower,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal but tinged with frustration. The poem is about the two sides of life and reality which make our world what it is. I live my life while taking the positive things with the negative. That's the way the world works for me. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.