Hi RomanticPoet27,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes then want to read on. The poem is about the difference between comedy and tragedy. Comedy and tragedy are both enjoyable in their own ways. I like some comedy and tragic works can be somewhat enjoyable. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.