Hi, jonblair , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating , I discovered "Star Voyagers: "JOURNEY TO PARADISE""  on the sci-fi genre page.

First thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with Captain Foxwell swiveling his command chair. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among characters builds the suspense.

I like: The last paragraph is my favorite because it draws the reader into the rest of the next part.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems. My only suggestion would be to add a link after the last paragraph to the next part.

Final thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story because of the main character Captain Foxwell.








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