Hi Miranda,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with disappointment and pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a time in your life when you reached out to a friend for help during a panic attack, but they were not there for you. I am so sorry that you did not get the support you needed. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.