Hi Miss303,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anxiety and self doubt. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone whose happiness is dependant on someone else. I am hoping that the speaker can find the strength to be their own person. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You do not use punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.