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 | Pieces He Ate  [E] Flash Fiction  |
| (4.5)  Greetings, Odessa Molinari! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2020" .  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.What I Liked  The first thing that stood out, was your dialogue! Very impressive, indeed! I truly enjoyed the sea salt's words along with his toothless grin.  Such a fun piece in less than 300 words! I loved it. I was so curious about why he ended up with a metal leg after having a wooden leg, that I was totally surprised and amused with the ending.  Suggestions/Thoughts/Comments Paragraph 5: Needs a space before the next paragraph. The title confused me: Pieces He Ate Does this have to do with the woodpecker pecking at the wooden peg? Final Thoughts Excellent piece! I loved it! Best of luck in the contest! Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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