This is a mysterious story to which this seems to be a preview for. I enjoyed it after the first two short paragraphs. In order for me to follow it I needed to read them a couple of times. I understand the woman's thoughts were spinning but so were mine trying to understand it. Half way through, the story got interesting and easier to follow. I like the story and your words are very descriptive, getting the reader right into the boat with her. An exciting and dramatic read.