Greetings, Casey, I am reviewing this today as a judge for "The Writer's Cramp" .

Writer's Cramp Prompt: Howard Carpendale had a great hit in Germany with a song with the following title: Hello Again.
Use it as your title, and start the second paragraph of your story with it. (bold for tomorrow's judge) For poets: You have to use it as your title and as start of your poem.

First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

Visually appealing
Easy to understand

Did the words flow naturally? Your rhyme, meter, choice of words, all worked well throughout this entire piece!

Is there anything I would change within the writing? Not a thing!

What did I like most? What stood out?

It's hard to pick what I liked most, though I did enjoy green peas whisper to the thirsty corn and The train weeps, sweeping past old Walt's disease. I also thoroughly enjoy the entire second stanza with Walt at the Miller Cave Cafe` thinking about leaving his red clay bumpkin life as he drains his beer. I could just keep going with all that I enjoyed in this beautifully written poem!

By the way, congratulations on your first place tie. I was certain the other person would win until your item popped up shortly before the contest ended. There's no way I could pick between the two. Awesome writing! Take care...

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