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 Supernatural Neighbors  Open in new Window. [E]
A woman discovers the real reason why her neighbors howl at the moon.
by Kellie Burke Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi! I'm happy to be reviewing this for "Annette's Anniversary Raffle" Open in new Window.. Remember that this review is all a part of the challenge and it is only my opinion. Please use what you find useful and ignore what you don't. This review is given in love and with respect to you and your writing.

*CheckB* Overall impression and emotional impact: Louis Fritz's introduction hooked me. The conversation between the neighbors moved the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.


*CheckY* Grammar, spelling, and mechanics: A typo in this phrase, they louder, I suggest changing they to the.


*CheckR* Suggestions for improvement: The only suggestion for improvement I have concerns the typo.


*CheckG* My favorite parts: I enjoyed reading this story. My favorite line was about Mr. Fritz's pups.


Thank you so much for sharing your writing! It was a pleasure to review you. I genuinely hope you found my comments useful, but feel free to ignore those you didn't.

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