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| (4.5)   Greetings, cdcraftee, I am reviewing this today as a judge for the "Writing 4 Kids Contest-CLOSED till May" . First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. Visually appealing Easy to understand Followed the prompt Plot: After moving from the big city into the country, Sarah realizes she isn't able to buy the essentials she had access to before her move, and the ingredients she uses for the special formula she needs for the baby, is next to impossible to find. Then she comes up with a great idea! Characters: Believable characters Dialogue: Good dialogue Setting: The country Technicalities: I didn't pick up on any misspellings, grammar issues, or typos.  I did, however, notice you have this rated for age 13+ and also as non-fiction. Not sure if you meant that, or not.   Favorites: I loved the ending! What an unsuspecting surprise!   Final thoughts: Like me, I think children would love your ending. And Nan, too, of course. This is an adorable story. I really liked your title! Best of luck in the contest!Have a great day and...  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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