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 |  | Farmer Dan Gets His Goats  [E] Farmer Dan goes to the market to buy himself some goats.  |
| (5.0)  Greetings, Marvelous Friend, I am reviewing this today as a judge for the "Writing 4 Kids Contest-CLOSED till May" . First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. Visually appealing Excellent visuals! Easy to understand Yes! Followed the prompt Perfectly! Goal: Farmer Dan goes to market to buy some goats but gets distracted.   Characters: Farmer Dan is quite a character!   Setting: The market Technicalities: I found no issues whatsoever. Excellent! Favorites: Oh my goodness! I loved this entire story! I absolutely love the interaction in this piece, along with the icons of all the animals. Children would love this! Final thoughts: I am so totally impressed with this little story. You are very gifted, I hope you realize. Writing for children isn't as easy as some think. You, my dear writer, have what it takes! Best of luck in the contest!Have a great day and...  K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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