Hallo! This one showed up on Random Reads. I enjoyed this story! The dialogue between the monsters and their attempts to make themselves 'scary' are hilarious. Some points: Why don't they invent a wig-washing machine, so you can just pop all those wigs in with some shampoo and press a button? sharps pains -- I think you mean 'sharp'. scary." The -- I think you mean scary," the similarly month." The ugliest -- month," the ugliest first play," The better -- first play," the better Standardise whether you have a capital 'D' for 'Dude' or not. You use the word 'sucked' a lot. Maybe find a synonym for something that's not to your liking? Thanks for the chuckle! Write On! Sonali My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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