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 Lost Loves Open in new Window. [E]
"Lost Loves" is a poem about having patience with ourselves...
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Wow! You wrote this a while ago, and it's so relevant even now. In fact, cooped up due to lock-down, Dad and I were going through some emotional upheaval and 'random reads' threw up your poem - just want I needed to read!

The poem gives a beautiful message, and the words you have used work well. I'd suggest maybe dividing it into verses for easier reading, and some WritingML like font, size and center.

Thank you for sharing this!
Write On!
Sonali

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