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 Without You Open in new Window. [ASR]
Who? Me? Suffer? That's funny...
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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This one showed up on random reads, and I'm glad it did! *StarStruck* Yes, yes! Nobody can make you feel unloved, and, as Whitney Houston says: "Learning to love yourself, it is the greatest love of all." It's a short poem but it packs a real punch. I wish more people would respond this way.

The title doesn't give away much which is as it should be, and the brief description is spot on.

My suggestions would be to pick two more genres, and see if you'd like to use some WritingML like center and font.

Write On!



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