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 | My Safe Harbor  [13+] A poem about love; a gentle rain on a tranquil sea.  |
| (4.5)| This one showed up on Random Reads. It's a lyrical poem with some lovely images and emotions. It speaks of a love that endures and stays strong over the years. The words chosen work well to evoke the mood of a gentle romance. I like the little note at the end, too! Suggestions: 1. Some WritingML, like color, font, size and center. 2. In some verses, you follow a rhyme scheme, and in others, you don't. Maybe you could standardize that for smoother reading. Thanks for sharing this! Write On!  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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