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Again, I like the layout and the font you have used. The poem has evocative imagery and stirs up emotions.

I know it's a style choice and fits in the rhyme scheme and the flow, but for me, the 'soul' is deeper than the 'eyes'. I sort of felt the 'eyes' get deceived first at a shallower level and the the soul, after that and more intensely.

When you say 'killing of' do you mean 'killing off'?

Thanks for sharing this poem!

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