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Thank you for sharing this.
You've given a succinct summary in a few powerful words. The last line packs a real punch. The layout works well for the message you are conveying.

While the poem works brilliantly as it is, in my mind I found myself re-reading the last verse to get its full impact. Maybe you could repeat it, like a refrain? Or maybe just the words 'just begun, just begun' like an echo ...?

Thanks again for sharing this!
Write On!


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