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 Review #4615360 |
  Greetings from "The WDC Angel Army" !Hallo This one showed up on Random Reads. It's a good piece of flash fiction. Since you've titled it 'Friends', one naturally assumes that that is whom you are speaking to, and it unfolds as a surprise who it really is and why you chose this title. You bring out the dynamics of a family really well without resorting to 'telling'. Also, how one incident can change the existing equations between family members who actually realize how much they mean to each other. I have no suggestions for the story itself, it works fine as it is. I'd only say use the brief description and genres more to your advantage to get this piece a wider audience, and maybe some WritingML like font, size and line spacing for readability. Thanks for sharing this one! Write On!  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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