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This one showed up on Random Reads, and I'm glad it did.

Oh my goodness, this is something I've felt so often! I can totally relate. The only difference is that I've thought of it as 'needing to stop and be dusted off', which is older technology than what your poem reflects! *Ha*

The verse structure and words chosen work well to convey your message. I was going to suggest some punctuation but on another reading, I realised that the lack of punctuation reflects what you're saying.

So, I have no suggestions for the poem itself. Maybe you would like to try some WritingML like font and center.
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