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The Lost City Open in new Window. [E]
Can he escape before they find him?
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Superb job with the prompt! You held the suspense throughout, I was hanging on your every word, waiting to know what happened, rooting for the character. And what can I say about how it unfolded, and the last line ... ? *Laugh*. Brilliant twist.

This is a masterful piece of flash fiction - you have a character, a conflict, a setting and even manage a plot with a twist in it! What more could a reader ask for?

The title, brief description, cover pic and genres all work. The only tiny suggestion I'd make is for font size and line-spacing, for easier readability.

Thanks for sharing this!
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