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It's my pleasure to review this story "Invalid Item" Open in new Window.. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. The title of the story caught my attention.

This is a good story written with the given prompt and you managed it well. I can imagine the scene perfectly. I like the main character.
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