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 Review #4615914 |
 | Cat Scratch Contract  [E] I join the circus.  |
| (4.5)| This is a review from "The WDC Angel Army" !Hallo! This one showed up on Random Reads. It's a second-portfolio I've seen around the site, and I'm assuming we've met in your first portfolio too, though I don't know which that is!  I enjoyed this tale of joining Barnum and Bailey's circus!  Love the way you slip that in! The poem flows smoothly, the verse structure and rhyme scheme (and occasional asides in parenthesis) work well to carry the tale forward. I especially appreciate how many ways there are to say 'cats scratch'. Maybe this could be a reference for people who want to find synonyms of those words!  I agree with the last verse - you definitely needed that amendment. I just wonder if you could tweak it a mite so it reads something like 'in spite of my confidence otherwise, I needed this change'.Maybe some WritingMl - center, font, size, colour and linespace, to add to the flow. Meow On!    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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