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Hallo! This one showed up on Random Reads. Well, you held my interest throughout. The dialogue flows naturally and builds the story up really well. The ending made me ![]() Suggestions: You've only picked 'contest entry' as a genre, suggest you pick a couple more. Your description could hint at something without giving it away. The story is good, the brief description should build more expectation. The last dialogue needs the close-quotes" Question: Did they put up more than one notice? It's a bit confusing on this point. Write On! ![]() ![]()
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