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 Review #4616739 |
 | Feather Spirit  [E] Small Stone poem  |
| (5.0)| Hallo! I visited your portfolio because you have an account anniversary this month. The title led me to click on this poem. The brief description was a bit puzzling, taken with the title, but then I saw the note at the end and realized what you meant! Thanks for the note - I hadn't heard of this term before. I rather like it. Nice topic for a little poem! I love the way you have captured the moment fully. The alliteration, rhyme and rhythm evoke the movement perfectly. I could see the bird hopping around and the last line made me smile, too! I like the centered layout. May I suggest some color and maybe a change of font. Also, a cover picture might be nice. Write On!  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 06/30/2021 @ 11:51am EDT