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Practice! Open in new Window. [E]
An acrostic for J, Cursive can be so hard!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hallo!
The title, brief description and cover picture are interesting. I love the acrostic form, and I enjoyed reading this one.

While the poem works well as is, I'm wondering if the impact of the word 'practice' is diluted because of the repetition in later lines. Maybe three times in the first line, and then use synonyms or related words when you want to mention it later ... ? Just a thought.

I wonder if 'J' was encouraged by this poem, to continue attempting cursive!

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