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 The Soccer Season's Now A-foot Open in new Window. [ASR]
A Kyrielle poem (week 29) about a youth recreational soccer league.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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The reviews now, they fill the site
A flurry of typing that's insane
They tell what's good and not-so-right
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This poem tells of kids who don't tire
The title works brilliantly
But why the genre 'satire'?
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The 'a-foot' is great word play
Because that's where the ball is
Nice punning, I shall loudly say
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The layout works, the rhyme scheme
Gave a lovely flow
I didn't quite catch the mothers' dream
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Thanks for the explanation at the end
I don't know much about forms
So notes, to me, some support lend
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I think I've said all that's needed
Thanks for sharing this verse
Will my review be heeded?
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