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Fair Weather Friends Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about fair weather friends
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hallo!
You've captured the feelings so well.

The title, brief description and genres work for your poem. The quote at the beginning sets the mood. The rhyme scheme and verse structure work to give your message.

While the poem is fine as it is, I somehow find myself searching for the 'silver lining' each time! What I think would be a silver lining here is another verse, about finding a true friend among all the fair-weather ones and how lovely and heartwarming that is. Of course, this is only my personal viewpoint. I understand what you are conveying here and appreciate the poem as it is.

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