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I visited your portfolio because it's your WdC Anniversary today. The title intrigued me and I clicked on this poem.

What a lot you've evoked in just four lines!
The need for both, wisdom and nurturing, from all those who can give it. Also, with the use of the word 'return' and 'again', you imply further that you once had this and have lost it, which seems to be the state of humankind today. Great writing! *Thumbsup*

The title, brief description and genres work. I would love to see a cover photo added. The rhyme scheme and verse structure work, too. I wonder if you'd like to use some WritingML like font, size and maybe color.

Thanks for sharing this!

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