"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 

STRUCTURE

I like the direction the poet has given the reader. The commas, semi-colons, and full stops tell the reader when to pause and fade. It is like a script and, although the lines are not the same size, feels very uniformed to me, which I like. It paints a picture and, not only can I feel the words, but see an image as well. I enjoyed reading it and got the feel of witches round a campfire chanting.

TONE

The tone felt spooky to me, which I loved. I thought of Halloween and felt a tingle go down my spine. I did feel a thrill while I read this poem and I love dragons as well. I thought the tone suited the words and the poem.

SUGGESTIONS

I think this poem is perfect just the way it is. I think to change anything would change the tone and that would be disastrous.

STYLE

I like the rhyming style of this poem and think it suits this poem very well. It is not an emotional poem, as in about a particular emotion, but it does stir emotion in me.

TITLE

I can see why you called it this but I am not sure. To be fair, I find titles a nuisance lol. I can never get them right and, when I do think of a great one, it is usually already taken.

IMAGE

As I said, witches around a caldron on a fire. It reminds me of the three witches from Macbeth, or I think it was Macbeth, but I could be wrong.

FINAL THOUGHTS

Great poem and thank you for sharing.



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