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 The Ooze Open in new Window. [ASR]
A snippet made during a stamina drill. No plot, just atmosphere. Where could this go?
by Joto-Kai Author Icon
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Review by sindbad Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi
Joto-Kai

This story captures a scene in the court with utmost genuinity and unique crossroads. As a reader l can write a long and meaningless review to express about your subtle and sudden change of perception in the story at the courthouse. Great job indeed..sindbad


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