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Given: Sep 7, 2021 at 4:24pm
Length: 459 Characters |
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J. Peter
This is a nice and rather free flowing story with some hard hitting incidence with rather unprecedented and unpredictable reactions. As a reader l did feel sympathy for Ralph and his role as a survivor. Overall the story was astounding. I took some time after reading the story to recollect myself. This story will have enhanced appeal if written in small paragraphs so that readers can move up or down to tally the point of reference..sindbad
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