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 The Dragon Thief- On Dragons Wings II Open in new Window. [E]
The further adventures of a girl and her dragon.
by Author Joseph J. Madden Author Icon
Review by sindbad Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
Author Joseph J. Madden

This is a nice and interesting adventure you have written here with all the melodrama to make it a block buster. L did go through the story once all the mystical creatures and orb do keep the story exciting and refreshing. I did feel there was some drag on need for action. I am sure this story is just a sequel some adjustments will make a great and refined story..sindbad


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