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by Jacky Author Icon
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Review by sindbad Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi
Jacky

This is a nice and rather enigmatic story. A story though normal makes reader realize that people like Jake who ae dedicated and focused in their younger days to mundane activities, can achieve great heights on activities that seems routine. Overall l wonder in a wishful way that my luck as well attract some interesting ideas.. sindbad

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