Hello Bubblegum J.

I found this haunted house story interesting. You have an appealing narrative voice.
The dead people’s way of reappearing in their former body is intriguing. A ghost is a spirit not a being.
The story of this old couple has an appeal. They seem to be benign ghosts. Still, people feel apprehensive about staying in the house. Everybody has a negative feeling about a ghost, be it good or not. Nobody can be friendly with a ghost.
The history of the house draws us in. There is something quite attractive about a ghost story as it happens with this one.

The pace is leisurely and the language, easy and spontaneous.

I have enjoyed it.

Write on!




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