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Greetings BlueMoon ! Disclaimer: The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by GERVIC and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Overview: Your poem was listed under the VIP section of "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]" and I'm here to deliver to you my review. Also, this review is part of your Extravagant Surprise package from "Magical Express Delivery Wagon" . Title: Purely Coincidental is a great choice of title. It's captivating to the readers and one would surely take a read at your piece to discover what coincidence the writer encountered. Great job on providing a quick description. Overall Impression/Emotional Impact: There is a shift of emotion in this piece. At first, the character was so sad, lonely because of losing her lover three years ago. She went on an adventure with a rented car, to Africa in particular. She was in-love by then but still haven't moved on. And so, she took a trek to hopefully find her junk box hero, Mark. And she believed that things will be okay. Form, Format, Rhyme and Meter: Free verse. No set meter and rhyme. Artistic Voice and Imagery: Imagery is clear. It is clearly visible to my mind the scenes that took place in this poem. Great one!. Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics: None detected. Favorite Lines: None. Suggestions: None. Final Thought: It's a good piece about one's life's experience. It's nice to read pieces like this - hopeful and inspirational. Pieces that talks about the experiences of others which offers bits of lessons for readers to relate with. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing. Reviewed by: GERVIC My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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