Hello Jay O'Toole !

Your poem was featured in the WDC SuperPower Reviwers May Review Raid and I enjoyed it so decided you deserved a review.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
You wrote a fun and beautiful Mother's Day poem.

You kept me riveted throughout and made me read straight through to the end.

My own Mom would have loved this poem.


MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

This was a highly engaging poem and felt both lighthearted and powerful because it was surely true of your Mom and was true of my own too..

Your poem was beautifully written, evoked strong emotions in me, and was interesting and a joy to read.

Your poem is well written, flows nicely and, I think, is highly relatable to anyone who has a loving mother.

My favorite line is impossible to decide because I liked so many so much.

I liked how you structured your poem.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your poem.

The picture you chose and genres you selected are perfect for your poem. I wondered if that was your own Mom in the picture? If so, that makes it all the more special and perfect.


CONCLUSION:
You wrote a great tribute poem that I enjoyed reading. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your poetry with the writing.com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler



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