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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem about the things in life to be thankful for.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poem was very heartfelt. I loved the line about the dog. I can definitely see that happening at a Thanksgiving feast.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. The line "I have a thankful soul," repeats in the last 2 stanzas, which I find strategic, as it augments the reasons for giving thanks.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read. I enjoyed the use of WDC as the font made it easier on the eyes and the orange struck the tone/mood in which the poem was written (for thanksgiving).

My one suggestion, a bit nit-picky here, is to capitalize "God," when referring to the singular Lord.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "You can see the changes in the trees and in the wind"

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The poem paints nice vivid strokes of the Thanksgiving holiday and taps in emotion well.

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