My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

THE POEM

The poem takes a look at the Christmas hustle and bustle, but hints there is more to the season if you just slow down to listen.

WHAT I LIKED

I liked the message of the poem, very heartfelt and honest.

STRUCTURE

This is free form poem.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "the season is not all baubles and bows"

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I have no suggestions for improvement. I liked how the author explored the dichotomy of the season, commercialism/fast pace vs slowing down and enjoying the emotional elements (gratitude/appreciation/kindness).