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Home Is Across the Threshold   [E]
A soldier goes home
by Shadow Prowler-Spreading Love
Review by Odessa Molinari
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This starts with a scene all too often in the news. A soldier, injured on the battlefield. Although you don't say it, I take it the doorway leads to heaven.

I got a strong sense of the man's pain. His struggle felt very real. What little dialogue there was sounded natural. Do you have experience on the battlefield? It sounds like you do.

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