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Crossing Over  [ASR]
from the Otherworld
by Dave
Review of Crossing Over  
Review by Odessa Molinari
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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As a crime writer myself I am all too familiar with the dead body. You have brought a new element to the scene with the deceased paying a visit to her husband and getting her revenge.

You don't actually say that he was her killer, but I think she would know. The setting for the finding of the body gives a feeling of foreboding. You then lull the reader into a false sense of normality, then WHAM, you hit them with the ghost.

Well-constructed and very creepy.

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