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 The Fox  [E]
Flash Fiction
by Jacky
Review of The Fox  
Review by Odessa Molinari
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I like the description of your regular walks. You take us through the seasons as a way of showing the passing of time.

I certainly know the feeling of sitting at home with nothing to do. I just wish I was up to walking. Or sewing for that matter.

This phrase seems a bit awkward - if it had even actually really been there.Also, why is there a speech mark at the very start of the story?

I have read many of your flash fiction entries and I always find them entertaining.

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