*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4674556
Review #4674556
Viewing a review of:
 Four Prune Ritual  [E]
Writer's Cramp, 10/17/22
by Cave Dweller
Review of Four Prune Ritual  
Review by Odessa Molinari
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
I am reviewing for I'm participating in Halloween Review Stew! Click the image to make some too!




Welcome to WDC.

There is something rather ...existential ...avante guarde ... about this piece. You mention baying at the moon, I thought wolf or maybe werewolf. But then your main character seems to take human form when he searches for the prunes.

This reminds me of some of the weird writings we studied at college. Post-post-modernist I think they called it.

I take it Skippy is the man on the corner. But why did you say he produced the third prune. I wasn't aware of the first two being found.

Keep Writing

Sue

*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!.
   *NoteR* You have not yet responded to this review. Ignore
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4674556