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 Day 1 Prompt  [E]
What memory from your childhood stands out most clearly?
by IAmMeadowRayne
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Review by Odessa Molinari
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Welcome to WDC.

The first thing to learn when writing online is space. Short paragraphs with space between are far easier to read.

Childhood memories. The older you get, the more you forget. I am sorry your relationship with your mother wasn't a happy one. Mine wasn't when I was a kid. It was only when she began to get senile that I could talk to her about anything without her telling me off.

It is those little things that bring us joy in later life. A shared moment. Something simple like chocolate.

Keep Writing

Sue

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