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Welcome to WDC.

It is great to see a Newbie entering a contest on their first day here. Some useful tips: When writing on screen, leaving spaces between short paragraphs makes it much easier to read. When entering contests, get in the habit of putting a wordcount at the beginning or end of your work and then again in your forum post. Not everyone demands it, but if you make it a habit you can't go wrong.

It is interesting how family rituals start. Watermelons on 4th July sounds like a good one. As to the sibling rivalry - that is something I missed out on being an only child. At least a game of golf is a harmless one. Unlike my BFF, who was forever falling out with members of her large family. Social media has its downside.

Keep Writing

Sue



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .